A new beginning

Toying with story telling again.

“Some days the best thing is to put in a hard days work.   Other days are best to lock up and go fishing.  The problem is you never know which is which until it’s too late.”

This is a re-telling of Brighton and Lynarra’s story from earlier.  I’ve decided that, like before, Lynarra is able to use magic, but I’m adding a steampunk-ish twist in that Brighton is a mechanical craftsman.

Anyway, story telling is starting to bloom again, which makes me happy.  What do you think of the opening?

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  1. I’m happy to hear that stories are blooming again! I like the opening line–I think the exact same thing can be said about writing. 🙂 I can’t wait to read more!

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