Toying with story telling again.

“Some days the best thing is to put in a hard days work.   Other days are best to lock up and go fishing.  The problem is you never know which is which until it’s too late.”

This is a re-telling of Brighton and Lynarra’s story from earlier.  I’ve decided that, like before, Lynarra is able to use magic, but I’m adding a steampunk-ish twist in that Brighton is a mechanical craftsman.

Anyway, story telling is starting to bloom again, which makes me happy.  What do you think of the opening?